As a class we came up with this:
'As I walked through the transparent water I could feel the water’s natural flow. A lonesome lily floated gracefully downstream. Fish darted through my legs. Darkness surrounded me, There was no sound except the sound of my own breath. As I took my first steps onto land in front of the intimidating castle I was forced to the ground. I was taken to a cell, the room looked almost insignificant with a solitary statue reminding people that visited what this room was for.'
I'm also adding some photographs of you all working from today's lesson at the bottom of the blog as well as the word cloud we came up with.. Below you need to leave a comment with the sentence that you are most proud of from today's work.
Mr. H.
Night was falling. I couldn't wait any longer. I'd have to go in the isolated, eerie castle...
ReplyDeleteBy MN
and EW
DeleteThat lesson was really fun! I could do it all day!
ReplyDeleteMN
Loved reading lots of Wonderful Writing, well done Class 4.
ReplyDeleteMr. Wainwright
That's brilliant MN, I'm very impressed!
ReplyDeleteBlack smoke rose from every tower, overseeing the castle's grounds.
ReplyDeleteJB
I ran. I had no choice other than to go to the desolate castle.
ReplyDeleteWP
The streetlights shattered into fire. The fire blocked every entrance. I thought it was all over. There was a forsaken gap so I ran as the castle burnt to smithereens.
ReplyDeleteTB
I walk in the cobblestone streets of the abandoned citadel; the best side of it was the countryside flowing through my delicate bones. OW
ReplyDeleteAS I nimbly fetch throu the transparent river I grab the damp dirt before falling down a never ending waterfall.
ReplyDeleteE.S